My 1st para for HT first para contest :)

Ok..so HT recently had this first para contest and they gave the first line: It wasn't a dark and stormy night but quite the opposite actually.
Now the following is my first para to the first line provided by them...may be a start to a novel or a short story..I dunno... :)

It wasn't a dark and stormy night but quite the opposite actually. It was a bright Sunday morning and little Meena was shooed away from the swing by other girls. Why other girls don't play with me? Why can't I have a nice frock, doll, pink shoes and neatly combed hair? …she wondered as she enviously looked at them. Hiding behind the Neem tree, bits of food she collected from the garbage lay on her dirty scarf. She saw girls play, throw tantrums and lick ice-creams…"Yummy, wish I could have one in this scorching heat!" stroking a puppy-- Jaggu, her only friend.

Jaggu ran to bring back a fallen ice-cream stick for her…"Oh! Only you love me, come let's share it." Merrily they play along when someone is coming near her…she has seen her, but where? She is tall, fat with bushy eyebrows with round red eyes and draped in a black cloak.

"Jaggu let's run, or...